Here's a short story, almost a scene by my son, Corbin

My sister and I pose for the camera as we stand in front of silver blue sky and let the sparkling cold water tickle our toes.  As a  hard cold breeze blows upon us, we feel excitement flow through us as we smile.  We can't wait until the flash is over so we can jump in the crystal water.

Definitely wordy like his father, but I suspect he is probably much better at painting a picture than I am.  :)